Two comments from early readers of the manuscript are the basis for this post. One person said the book, set in England in the 1770's, should have been set in America. The reasoning was, of course, that Americans rather read about America.
That advise makes perfect sense. First off, the American colonies were no more a miniature 
England than was colonial India, so sure, that would work. (Of course not.)
I can imagine moving Kathryn's Beach, one of my books, to Arizona. I hardly think that Kathryn would have run to the hot desert for solace in the way she ran to the beach.
A story needs to be set where it belongs.
I can imagine moving Kathryn's Beach, one of my books, to Arizona. I hardly think that Kathryn would have run to the hot desert for solace in the way she ran to the beach.
A story needs to be set where it belongs.
If Americans are only interested in stories set in America, 
then what is the explanation for the popularity of the Da Vinci Code or James 
Bond, or even Out of Africa and Mary Poppins? Please don't mention to J. K. 
Rowling that she should have written her million+ best sellers about Harry 
Potter set in America. It simply would not have worked.
Another suggestion was that the book didn't 
contain enough about lacemaking. Um, refer to the title. The book is about the 
daughter of a lacemaker. It is fiction, not a how-to book.
What does work is that Diane knows a whole lot about lacemaking and gave that essence to the story. The book gives a glimpse of the life 
of an English lacemaker. But the story is about one particular person, her 
family, and the people she meets.
Keeping with the Cactus Rain Publishing tradition, Diane 
delivers a well written, entertaining, feel-good read that does what literature 
is expected to do; guide the reader through an enjoyable experience that 
dispenses with their current reality.
The point is, write what you know. If your character is 
schizophrenic and you have no experience with the classic behaviors of 
schizophrenic people, on and off their medication, then do the research to make 
your story, even fantasy and science fiction, believable to the point the reader 
can dispense with reality and become immersed into the story. Follow Diane's example of excellence in storytelling.
Happy writing and reading.
Check out http://www.dianekrobertsonbooks.com/
Lacemaking video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiTqdr38tTU

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